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[05 May 2005|08:23pm]

pop_goes_weasel
wanted to share a poem that won an english merit thing

Our Song

The words
—Etched with golden letters on my heart—
Glisten and glow as you whisper
Harmonized lyrics
Written by our souls

The dance
—Executed with angelic movements in the clouds—
Twists and turns as we connect
Romantic sways
Choreographed by our souls

The music
—Played with eternal melody as the angels sing—
Laughs and lingers as we kiss
Tingling lips
Brought together be our souls
cmt

Chocolate Stained [30 Apr 2005|11:39pm]

freeoni
[ mood | accomplished ]

-Chocolate Stained-
"Instead of going to bed he
Ate the last two bowls of ice cream.
He was so drunk it didn't matter
How much missed his mouth.

At the foot of the stairs
He shivers in his underwear
And does not stop to wonder
Why she even cares.

He stumbles up into his room,
Maxing out his radio just
To entertain his sorry brain
Until he passes out-
Chocolate-stained."


Question: does it sound too strange that the tense goes from past in the first stanza to present in the last two?
I just noticed the change now, and it was a while ago that I wrote this...
the edited stanza would be
"Instead of going to bed he
Eats the last two bowl of icecream.
He is so drunk it doesn't matter
How much misses his mouth."

;) tanks

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Intro-ee-yo [26 Apr 2005|05:36pm]
__memphis
[ mood | giddy ]

My name is Priscilla. I am 14, 15 in about two weeks.

I found out about this community because Tara promoted and forced me to join.

I am here because I am scared of Tara and conform to her ways without questioning them.

 

And heres a sample of things I writeCollapse )

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[26 Apr 2005|03:41pm]

__taco__

hey guys.

I am new but I've been writing since like 1st grade (about 5 years). So yeah, im only in 6th grade, woot woot.

I like alot of music. Fave bands are probably Midnight Aria, My Chemical Romance, The Acedmey is..., Brand New, Bright eyes, Alkaline Trio, Thrice, and Thursday.

I love writing.

i wanted to share this quote with you.

Anything beautiful fades away, and anything
ugly fades away, too. It almost hurts to love
things, because they have to stop being that.
And that's just the nature of life.

- Conor Oberst of the band Bright Eyes <3 -

 

 

writing sample, its a songCollapse )

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[25 Apr 2005|05:35pm]

pop_goes_weasel
What's the point
in tellling lies
everyday to everyone
everytime you
speak

What's the point
in pretending to be someone
that you're not
everytime you
speak

What's the point
in hiding in the crowd
losing all identity
everytime you
speak

That's the point
in being in their crowd
just becoming popular
everytime you
speak

If that's your point
then something is wrong
They're all waiting for you to fall
Who's gonna help you
So tell me
What's the point

 


 



 

cmt

imaginary things like a twenty-second birthday [24 Apr 2005|07:12pm]

freeoni
I found this in my Jane Eyre book:

Flat on my
back watching raindrops smack
the windshield upside down.

A mouse in a paper bag'll shake,
shiver and quake. Trying to balance
with feet higher than my head.
Keep it zen.


I suppose some explination is in order.
Sometimes, I write what I see.
I was upsidedown in the Element watching the rain after I had to get rid of a mouse (we have live traps).
cmt

I'll be the first to start this off [24 Apr 2005|05:41pm]

pop_goes_weasel
The Moment For MeCollapse )
cmt

[24 Apr 2005|05:21pm]

freeoni
Hi.
I guess my name is Liz, but I'm not a big fan of the name. Call me Elle, call me Shorteh.... Call me anything, just so long as you call me. ^_~
A bit about meself....
Writing rather happens to me.
I have green eyes.
And I'm afraid of turning grills on.
Cheers. :)
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Welcome to the Community [24 Apr 2005|03:31pm]

pop_goes_weasel
Welcome to the new community. I'm Tara and I created this community to post any sort of writings (poems/songs/short works) Anyone can feel free to join. Just please post stuff in lj cuts if they are long. I'll start posting my own stuff as we get started. If you don't want feedback please don't get upset if people comment about your work. I'll talk to you all later.
4 | cmt

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